These times are too harsh. Many conflicts are appearing, I just don't think i can help out with them and take care of Jem and Scout at the same time all the time. Snow is a first here, a bit of happiness came with that, especially for Jem and Scout with their snowman that looked a bit deformed but not for Ms. Maudie she hated it because her plants would die. Speaking of Ms. Maudie, i can't believe her house (that was adjacent to ours) had burnt down and along with that I also can't believe that Boo had gotten out (it is good though that he isn't isolate much), since pretty much everyone in Maycomb was outside. Christmas wasn't all that bad, my brother Frank came over with his no swearing rule and it was amusing to see Scout try not to.
Scout does need more discipline she feels like she has to fight whenever she feels the need to defend herself or whenever someone else makes fun of her or her family. But you just need to ignore it, if someone calls you a (For Example) nigger-lover it doesn't really mean that you are one. Unless you agree with them, but that would be stupid. I hear from scout constantly that her cousin Francis is ANNOYING. Nigger-Lover also does lead us to my case. I am struggling to keep Tom Robinson, black male accused for raping a white female. I just don't think i can convince people that he is innocent especially during this racist and depressed time. I don't see why people have to be so mean to these people they mean well and they are nice clean people.
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Your sentences aren't flowing right; they're really choppy. Try talking a little longer about HOW times are harsh, and what conflicts are enveloping. You should have noted that the snowman was meant to look like Mr. Avery, but Scout and Jem switched it to Miss Maudie. I think you're using your vocabulary words incorrectly, you might want to check that. I like how you made Atticus' feelings come out when you said Scout has to stop always getting in fights. I liked how at the end you made it obvious that Atticus liked Black people. But you're words are very jumbled, and your punctuation isn't it's best.
I like how you explained how times were hard but scout and jem still lived through them and made a mock snowman of Mr. avery.Also you should talk about how boo put the blanket on them.
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